din jai, din ase. proti ta diner suru hoi ek notun surjer aloke. sokaler prothom surjo rosshi notun ekti diner dut hoe prithibite neme ase. ekti notun din nie ase notun alo notun asha notun vorosa notun swapno. kintu ajker prithibite sei sob kichu bodle jacche. proti ti notun din manuser mone nie ase notun notun atonko bhoi r bhiti. aj prithibite chorie poreche ek atonker poribes. keu janena tar jonne agami muhurto kon duswapno boe nie asche. chutrdike jeno kono koral chaya prithibike gras kore feleche. je dike chai sudhui rokto r rokto. prithibi aj sotti roktosnato. sontras aj prithibir aina hoe darieche. dhormer name deser name hanahani katakati aj prthibir porichoy. manus rastai berole janena se sosorire ghore fire aste parbe kina. sisu,mohila, purus briddha othoba briddho keui bad nei ei sontraser kobol theke. majhe majhe bisforoner bhoyonkor sobde kompito hoe othe prithibir buk. prithibi sihorito hoe othe arto ,pirito manuser krondon r chitkarer sobde. sontrasbad aj chorie poreche prithibir konai konai. protidini lakh lakh niroho manuske prithibi chere chole jete hocche sontrasbader boli hoe.
kintu keno kichu manuser mone ei roktololupota eto bibhotso bhabe jege utheche. jara eto manuser pran nicche tarao to manus tobe keno tader mone emon sorbonasha rokter nesha. jara emon kore eto manuser pran nicche tadero to poribar roeche. tobe kiser jonne eto hanahani eto katakati. dhormer name kiser jehad. kon dhormo sekhai manuske manuser pran nite. hindu, musolman christian kon dhorme roeche manuser rokto dhormoke pobitro kore. kon bhogoban manuser songe manuser hanahani dekhe manuske ashirbad koren. sontrosto prithibi aj baruder gondhe atonkito. niriho manus din gunche ebar bujhi tar pala elo. keno aj emon poristhiti emon sundor prithibir. keno eto rokter nesha aj manuser. ei proshner jobab karor kache nei. manus ki chai seta bodhoi manus nijeo janena. eisob sontrasbadira kon morichikar pechone chute choleche tao manuser ojana. eder lorai kiser biruddhe kiser songe setio ekdom sposto noi. kiser chahidai tara nijeder aponjoner boli diteo etotuku sonkoch korena. kiser tane tader ei sontras sobi boro osposto. sudhu eto sober moddhe protidin manuser eker por ek jibonhani ghotei choleche.
eto kichur majheo ami ashabadi. ekdin asbe ek notun sokal. jekhane thakbena kono sontras thakbena kono roktopat thakbena kono bisforoner sobdo. prithibi hoe uthbe santo snigdho. prithibir soundorjo abar mugdho korbe manuske. manus abar ek anondomoy jibonjapon korbe. gore uthbe manuser moddhe ek bhalobasar somporko. kothao thakbena kono hingsa kono des kono lorai. thakbe sudhu 1ti sobdo...........bhalobasa.
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Ei lekha ta khub bhalo laglo. Sob sheshe asha'r ekta sporsho.
Sotti khub bhalo lekha....
Jhum..tor lekhata porlam..lekha r bhasa ta khub sundor..kintu bhavna ta niye amar kichhu bolar achhe...prithivi ta ki satyi eto bhayankar? tui doha te kota santrasbad er ghotona suncechhis? Ami france e bose o goto ekbochhore ektao emon santrasbad er ghotona sunini...tui kintu gota prithivi r katha bolechhis..amar money hoy eta prithivi r kichhu part er ghotona...tar rajnaitik ar samajik karon achhe...tai sei karon gulo r gobhire na gele kintu problem ta ke upolobdhi kora jabe na..Yudhho to abohoman kal theke hoye aschhe..prithivi kintu tar rup ros gondho kichhui haray ni..ar sei karonei mone hoy tor lekha r pratham part e joto ta sanghatik chhobi tui tule dhorechhis...thik toto ta kharap abosthya bodh hoy noyni...hya tobe ja maranstro sab unnoto desh guli r kachhe achhe..ta byabohar korle bodh hoy aro sanghatik abosthya hobe prithivi r...Tor sangbedonsil mon ke sadhubad janai....
Jhum.you have a great command on 'writing'. Its a very matured subject.Keep writing.....
Also write on the brighter and lighter side of life, in your next!
tor sabta ek songe porte somay lagbe. kintu santrasbader lekhata pore toke natun chokhe dekhchi.amar tor style khub bhalo laglo. je manusher bhasha nei tui tader kathata bolte perechish.
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